‘I Love an Underdog Story’
Author of Pleasantview, Celeste Mohammed, started writing her book to meet the demands of her MFA program. But as the collection began to take shape, Mohammed saw how ‘it could be used to provide a realistic microcosmic view of contemporary Trinidad and Tobago. In other words, a view which would challenge the narrow, exoticized portrayals of the Caribbean which are typical in popular culture.’
By Celeste Mohammed
April 28, 2023
Photo Illustration by Onyinye Dike / THE REPUBLIC.
First Draft is our interview column, featuring authors and other prominent figures on books, reading, and writing.
Our questions are italicized.
What books or kinds of books did you read growing up?
I think my generation read what children throughout the British Commonwealth might have been reading: Enid Blyton books such as
The Faraway Tree series,
The Secret Seven, and
The Famous Five. Later, I read Nancy Drew mystery books,
Archie comics and
MAD magazine. This is in addition to the reading required in school which included classic works of British and West Indian literature.
If your life so far was a series of texts, which text (fiction or non-fiction) represents you at this moment?
It is difficult to pick one text. I will say that I often feel I am living inside a Gabriel García Márquez story, where Trinidad is Macondo and strange, supernatural occurrences keep interrupting the orderly reality for which I strive. Gaining some measure of international success as an author has only made that dichotomy and the feeling of surrealness even more poignant.
What’s the last thing you read and disagreed with?
The comment section of a video on Facebook where a little albino girl was given a—in my opinion, totally unnecessary and racialized—beauty make-over. I always tell myself I’m not going to read the comments on social media, then I do, and I’m horrified by what people say.
“Gaining some measure of international success as an author has only made that dichotomy and the feeling of surrealness even more poignant.
What’s the last thing you read that changed your mind about something?
I recently served as a judge for the fiction component of The Guyana Prize for Literature. In reading the many submissions, I got to glimpse the prevailing concerns of contemporary Guyanese writers. Although Guyana is our Caribbean neighbour, what I knew of the place was limited to media portrayals and the ‘ole-talk’ stereotypes I’d encountered while growing up. I had always heard that the Guyanese had a worse racism and political corruption problem than we do in Trinidad and Tobago, so I had expected any treatment of those topics to reflect that polarization. I was pleasantly surprised by the nuanced depictions of a multifaceted people seeking to heal and connect in new ways. Also, I was surprised to see that speculative fiction is quite popular in Guyana.
What is your writing process: edit as you write or draft first, then edit?
I do all of the above. In the first stage, it is natural to correct myself as I type and try to etch the images in my head onto the page. Generally, though, I work scene by scene. When I get the broad parameters of a scene on the page, I’ll go back and refine or build-out, fill in dialogue, until I feel the scene accomplishes what I think it should. Then I’ll move to the next scene. When the entire story is done, a different kind of editing—more informed, I guess—begins and will continue until I can’t find anything more to improve. (Of course, after it gets published, I always find something else!)
What was your process for writing your award-winning novel-in-stories, Pleasantview? The book started as my thesis for the MFA in Creative Writing at Lesley University, Cambridge, Massachusetts USA. I simply picked six of the stories I had written over the two-year program and honed them into a loosely connected collection. Publishers rejected the book. A few said it was too short and the stories weren’t ‘connected enough’. I was disappointed, of course, but determined to learn from that feedback. So, in the ensuing three years, I went on to carefully plot and write three new stories which pulled the collection into what I felt was akin to a novel.
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